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Post by Morreion on Jan 14, 2009 20:44:22 GMT -5
Hurrah! Glad to see you writing, Oat! Well-done, Sir!  And I have to say that 'the heat of summer' sounds pretty good right now, with single-digit temperatures. |
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Post by Oatik on Jan 14, 2009 21:27:06 GMT -5
Maybe that was my secret motivation!
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Post by Morreion on Jan 18, 2009 23:15:38 GMT -5
Alright, Throk's Bar is a good tale- please continue it!
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Jaema
Getting There
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Post by Jaema on Jan 19, 2009 22:29:10 GMT -5
The words tumbled out like broken glass over her strawberry lips
Vivid imagery, Oat. He's sooooo in trouble ....
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Post by Oatik on Jan 19, 2009 22:33:15 GMT -5
*laughs* today at work when I was brave enough to tell someone that I wrote something that was what I let them read.
The words tumbled out like broken glass over her strawberry lips.
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Post by Morreion on Jan 22, 2009 19:44:12 GMT -5
Just read Sunrise and it was a good tale of a Bright Wizard's first combat, full of confusion, guilt and shock- and may I be the first to say, 'Witch Elves are overpowered!'  |
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Getting There
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Post by Jaema on Jan 22, 2009 21:03:39 GMT -5
I agree -- good effort at combat writing. Something I don't like to do myself so am impressed when others do it.
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Post by Oatik on Jan 22, 2009 22:07:22 GMT -5
It took me a while to find my voice on Sunrise, I wanted to show the meeting between Oatik and Throk. Writing the combat part went quickly, but I'm guessing most writing is like that, sometimes you're unsure of where you're going, then once you know it just flows.
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Post by Morreion on Jan 22, 2009 22:08:29 GMT -5
I'm guessing most writing is like that, sometimes you're unsure of where you're going, then once you know it just flows. That's 100% correct in my experience
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Post by Morreion on Jan 25, 2009 17:11:52 GMT -5
Melkin was intriguing, Oat- a storyline from the point of view of a gal in the Empire. Interested here to see how it ties in with everything!
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